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~ Poetry Commission for TheFinalHikari ~
It Doesn't Hurt
I guess maybe I was a bit too confident.
I thought that, maybe if I had the courage to tell you how I felt,
you would accept me.
I hoped that if I tried to win your heart slowly by the smallest kind deeds,
you would acknowledge and return my feelings.
But…I guess I was wrong.
When I confessed my feelings to you,
you told me you were already seeing someone else.
Even though you said it in the nicest way you could,
I was still shocked.
But it doesn't hurt.
I may have been turned down, but it does not hurt at all.
It really is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all, right?
However, my feelings for you will stay the same.
I will still love you in spite of all this.
And I will not give up.
If anything, I believe this experience has made me stronger.
I know that one day, you will realize my sentiments,
and I will at long last win your love.
It Doesn't Hurt
I guess maybe I was a bit too confident.
I thought that, maybe if I had the courage to tell you how I felt,
you would accept me.
I hoped that if I tried to win your heart slowly by the smallest kind deeds,
you would acknowledge and return my feelings.
But…I guess I was wrong.
When I confessed my feelings to you,
you told me you were already seeing someone else.
Even though you said it in the nicest way you could,
I was still shocked.
But it doesn't hurt.
I may have been turned down, but it does not hurt at all.
It really is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all, right?
However, my feelings for you will stay the same.
I will still love you in spite of all this.
And I will not give up.
If anything, I believe this experience has made me stronger.
I know that one day, you will realize my sentiments,
and I will at long last win your love.
Literature
A Thousand Loves
Can you keep up with me?
A life full of love stories
Kissing strangers in the rain,
riding on the backs of scooters with boys,
and getting sucked in to a hypnotic spell,
discovering the woman inside me.
A lost little girl has been found.
You can see her in my eyes
as I make love to a hobo on the side of a hill,
chasing dirty little secrets and letting
the forbidden touch me intimately.
Someone slap some sense into me
as I, overcome with giggle fits-
Is it really possible to live a life with a thousand loves?
Maybe I've stopped counting.
All that matters is that I love this moment-
right now- and love the person I am loo
Literature
Antonym Of Love
Your love is impatient, your love is unkind
It is envious, boastful, and proud.
Rude, selfish, ill-tempered...
This love of yours always keeps score.
What you call love delights in causing harm
It sneers in the face of truth
Your love defends nothing, believes nothing,
Hopes in nothing, endures nothing...
Is worth nothing.
Your so-called love
Fails
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Good Night
it started with “good night”
and the way you stopped saying it
and I told myself it was because
you were too tired
too weary
too worn
and I made it okay
then I stopped being your “good morning”
and everyone else saw you first
and I told myself it was because
you were too busy
too popular
too distracted
and I made it okay
now it ends with “good bye”
and it's not a cry for attention or a ploy for your love
you can tell yourself it's because
I'm too needy
too jealous
too much
but I gotta make it, okay?
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Poetry commission for ! ...again! Once again, the theme is unrequited love, but from a different approach -- from the point of view of a girl who was rejected by the one she admired. I tried to make the rejection seem as "polite" as possible, and added that she'll now work harder and do things from the heart more to win his love. Hope that's alright, TFH~!
And man...this new college semester is TAXING...OTL But I will make time for all this, honest! and my requests, too...even though they'll no doubt take longer than commissions
Poetry commission info: [link]
And man...this new college semester is TAXING...OTL But I will make time for all this, honest! and my requests, too...even though they'll no doubt take longer than commissions
Poetry commission info: [link]
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